A Rural Scene. Comments

later: 'sees' or 'scares' it away? ? I'll take either one. : ) It took me nearly 8 years to enjoy this poem (a great deal) once again! ! bri : ) ***** of course

Jak, I believe I recall you from 'years ago'. I wonder if you are still around. Hmm? Line 14: You have fallen into the 'its/it's trap'; many have fallen, including me. See? : 'So graceful against it's backcloth of blue.'

A beautiful flow of wonderful words.

from my 'favorites list' i am taking this to adorn my/our July 2017's 'showcase of and for PH poets'. Thanks. i have a new format which allows for any size of poem and easy access to the poem's page in the poet's site. i hope you are well. bri :)

how could i have left a comment just earlier this month and not have remembered i did? ? ? its hmm? :) music of the spheres.............was a phrase used in my college fraternity's ritual. a beautiful poem, and i'd like to have such a place to sit. i satisfy myself with a walk down a country road, past a cow pasture, a cemetery, and etc. Great poem.....again. bri :) memories to hone......esp. nice. i saw red kite in U.K. this year.

Been there......where the moments matter.....re-charge the energies. Good one.

How DARES that sandstone! Pretty cheeky of it! Its backcloth I am loving this and shall send to MyPoemList. I would chop outcropped from last stanza, .....but no one asked my opinion! ! Hee-hee. Favorite (of many) lines: It's amazing, you know, that a kite fears a crow,   For the crow comes and sees it away. :) Bri

Such beauty in your pen. I really was there surveying the scenic vista and loved the....'And my collie puts her head on my knee'. Your poem gives a feeling of well-being and belonging. Thank you Jak....10

Excellent rhyming and choice of words that compel vivid images. No cityscape could compare to this wonderful rural scene. What a delightful poem.

Wonderful imagery, and it rhymes too....10