Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, July 8, 2010

A Run Away Comments

Rating: 4.5

You ran away from me’
It was only honey bee
You were so scared
You were afraid and not dared
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Maulin Shah 24 July 2010

Was it your defeated tendency? Will you carry on with same frequency? It has generated a great concern It is to be proved wrong in turn.. it is defeated tendency...10

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Chand Shikari 12 July 2010

You ran away from me’ It was only honey bee You were so scared You were afraid and not dared.. simple displeasure act....10

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Hans Vr 09 July 2010

Written with feeling> Good rhymes. The reader can feel the mixture of hurt and upset. It is a well written poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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