a rumination on two boiled eggs one eaten the other about to be Comments

a double-acrostic egg-timer of a poem

for dave on his twenty-ninth birthday



beware time at its saturn ebb

or bar its charismatic echo

it flatters with confetti

liaises an unreal trail

energy loses its core

denies a new thread



effort's a bore

guiltwracking

gimcracking

stagnates



salivates

getcracking

grailtracking

excitatory lore



dreams newly landed

eggs being mythic ore

let this vision prevail

in a cut shell's graffiti

orisons were feasted - ergo

be alive to the next wise orb



first and last lines have 29 letters and spaces

lines starting with same letter rhyme (more or less)
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