Tuesday, December 29, 2015

A Rude Awakening Comments

Rating: 4.5

 I woke up that day to the noise of the T.V.
Wondering what was the matter,
Curiosity left me no choice but to watch.
I saw fire and devilish flames everywhere;
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Asma Zenjali
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Abderrahmane Dakir 09 February 2016

Nice poem about terrorism. All problems in the war is how we could fight our ego.Thank you for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 09 February 2016

Nice poem about terrorisme. Thank you for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 December 2015

Terror is when injustice and ego rule And the world divided: East. West. Muslim. Christian. When no one is willing to listen, A greedy few thrive and the many die hungry It is terrorism in all its forms that I am against. this is a wonderful poem and a real meditation. it has a positive message.. Terror in all its form i am against and i reject. thank you very much dear Poetess.

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Asma Zenjali 31 December 2015

I am happy you like it and yes i believe that terror has many forms what we should reconsider peace :)

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