Friday, July 5, 2019

A Royal Flush Comments

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Door slams on your side of the fault line
All self-control has abdicated
Having visited perfumed gardens
Delta vintage lingers on your lips
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Simone Harriman
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Bri Edwards 17 August 2019

What were YOU smokin' while writing this. it wasn't difficult to read. thanks. but i thought it'd be abour Elizabeth finishing up in the loo. i suppose someone does that FOR HER! ! ! ? bri :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 August 2019

Woooh what a ride, with your extraordinary brilliant muse around stellar diction and terms and the mention of the Nile all woven in in a splendid way woww. Kudos for this brill poem! ! I vote it highly. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

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Michael Walker 25 July 2019

Somewhat obscure, but original and imaginative. I liked it.

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