A Royal Birth Comments

To celebrate the royal birth, innumerable lights were lit in the firmament like burning chandeliers........most touching and impressive presentation. So beautiful that I made second visit.

the moon is now sitting in MyPoemList. bri :)

this is REALLY 'cool', and i don't mean its temperature. i like it, like it, like it. one might think you had been an English professor at one time! ! ! i'll look for the moon tonight, but usually the only 'moon' i see is the neighbor lady, through her open curtains, with her bedroom light on! it's good enough (almost) for me! ! ! her's is usually a FULL moon! bri :) to MyPoemList and perhaps you shall offer it for August's showcase. or do i have to swipe/steal it? bri :)

The Sun in the West has jumped into the water that has blown. Day, in deep regret has snuffled. Cradled high in the vast expanse, imagery has grown up to maximum effort. Innumerable lights were lit in the firmament with interaction of stars and crescent moon in sky. Royal birth has significance. A great imagery is drawn here and beauty of expression amazes mind. A nice poem is shared here really.10

A lovely descriptive write on the beauty of a crescent moon. The title is so apt. Very vivid imagery. A night sky lit up by a million stars n a moon is so richly n beautifully painted to delight the reader no end. A huge 10.

The brand new moon and the magnificence of multitudes of stars lights up this beautiful poetic piece.....10+

The drama is over, nothing much can be added after you had put it in such beautiful words. Tnank you Valsa.

Crescent moon is a delight to watch. The birth of the moon is so beautifully set in words.

Under the cover of darkness the aquamarine sky witnessed the birth of a crescent moon with angelic glow Yesterday night, i watched the crescent moon and was spellbound by its beauty. And today, what a co incidence! Dear Valsa, you have written a beautiful poem as pretty as the crescent moon. :) Surely, top marks for the royal birth!

Under the cover of darkness the aquamarine sky witnessed the birth of a full moon with angelic glow Sun gave his fire to the ocean for a tide, but his unicorn of light for a ride, was left behind in the blue skies, what a scene when this rider flies!

A poetic expression of the ways of nature so perfect and beautiful..