Sunday, August 2, 2009

A Routine Comments

Rating: 5.0

A routine, defines my day,
day in, day out, I want to get away.

Nine o'clock, right on time, mommy puts me to bed,
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Marisa Cherise
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Afzal Shauq 15 August 2009

Fate? What a joke, am I deserving? I guess he spoke. This routine, my routine, disgusting, haunting, daddys little secret, mine and his, wanting. For a change, something different, aching, why me, why now, house awaking. what a good and impressive way of writing poetry..well done, sure here you wish to make realize readers about the importance of time, and yes time is what we have to care.. bes theme and well writtn again..best of luck..10/10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 August 2009

The routine is narrated well in the poem.

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