Saturday, January 17, 2009

A Roundtable Tale Comments

Rating: 4.0

Arthur didn't see it,
His back was to the sky.
They looked to the Heavens,
Expecting then to die.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
Naida Nepascua Supnet 12 November 2010

you made a good story out of a famous tale, with all the rhymes and rhythms which everyone enjoys.

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Rose-marie Mitchell 10 February 2010

It's obvious you're inspired. What a treat! Praise God!

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alex waters 18 February 2009

You just don't see poetry like this these days. A Roundtable Tale was a great read, creative and original

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Bridgid Patrick 28 January 2009

thanks for a great tale :)

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Ency Bearis 27 January 2009

Awesome story and nice to read in verses..you wrote it very well as always...10

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Ridge Cahill 26 January 2009

Whimsical and mystical with a dash of outwardly charm. The Stonehenge reference at the end was delightfully unexpected. A very fun poem to read. Nicely done.

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Suzan Gumush 26 January 2009

This is a perfect remake of the tale of king Arthur and Merlin. It does send ones imagination into believing this tale might be true! A wonderful verse and as always well written. In todays society you can believe anything that was impossable. Give you 10!

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Fay Slimm 25 January 2009

Ah - what a quatrain tale and told with style, excitment and a sense of; adventure...... we will all long remember Arthur and Merlin - - and a look around Stonehenge will be enlightening if we find Arthure's mark! - - - all very well told... thank you for the fascinating tale........... from Fay

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

The story goes so well that it made me sit 'comfortably' to enjoy reading it. Tribute to King Arthur and his men, the style is unique, , we give 10 to every one, , for you 10 plus many more

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Lynda Robson 20 January 2009

Good piece Wolfey, keeps the reader engrossed until the very end, and a nice tribute to King Arthur and his Knights of the Round Table, 10 Lynda xx

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 January 2009

A grandest tribute to King Arthur and associates.Beautiful rhythm Wolfe!

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Chitra - 20 January 2009

elements of hsitory, myticism...all woven together to form such fine tapestry of creative words

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Tia Maria 19 January 2009

Fantastic - you got me believing & reliving one of the most amazing experiences playing at Stonehenge :)

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Tsira Goge 18 January 2009

Wolfey, The history, mysticism, allegory, forces me to think more deeply... And the round table gives chance for balance... Good compositions... I think that you here are in native role... Best wishes, Tsira

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Little Mo 17 January 2009

Magical, mystical, historical and educational. Fabulous. Loved it! Stonehenge is not far from where I live...it is indeed an awe inspiring part of England! Mo

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Duncan Wyllie 17 January 2009

The is alot of imagery and imagination in this one GW Thankyou for the post Love duncan X

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Ann Beard 17 January 2009

Excellent story expertly written. I enjoyed it very much. regards Ann

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not only is it beautiful, but also speckless. 'I hope to achieve such discipline someday.. gr8t

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Catrina Heart 17 January 2009

You brought me back to the stories of Merlin the great magician, Arthur and the Knights of the round table... great poem as always!

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