Arthur didn't see it,
His back was to the sky.
They looked to the Heavens,
Expecting then to die.
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It's obvious you're inspired. What a treat! Praise God!
You just don't see poetry like this these days. A Roundtable Tale was a great read, creative and original
Awesome story and nice to read in verses..you wrote it very well as always...10
Whimsical and mystical with a dash of outwardly charm. The Stonehenge reference at the end was delightfully unexpected. A very fun poem to read. Nicely done.
This is a perfect remake of the tale of king Arthur and Merlin. It does send ones imagination into believing this tale might be true! A wonderful verse and as always well written. In todays society you can believe anything that was impossable. Give you 10!
Ah - what a quatrain tale and told with style, excitment and a sense of; adventure...... we will all long remember Arthur and Merlin - - and a look around Stonehenge will be enlightening if we find Arthure's mark! - - - all very well told... thank you for the fascinating tale........... from Fay
The story goes so well that it made me sit 'comfortably' to enjoy reading it. Tribute to King Arthur and his men, the style is unique, , we give 10 to every one, , for you 10 plus many more
Good piece Wolfey, keeps the reader engrossed until the very end, and a nice tribute to King Arthur and his Knights of the Round Table, 10 Lynda xx
A grandest tribute to King Arthur and associates.Beautiful rhythm Wolfe!
elements of hsitory, myticism...all woven together to form such fine tapestry of creative words
Fantastic - you got me believing & reliving one of the most amazing experiences playing at Stonehenge :)
Wolfey, The history, mysticism, allegory, forces me to think more deeply... And the round table gives chance for balance... Good compositions... I think that you here are in native role... Best wishes, Tsira
Magical, mystical, historical and educational. Fabulous. Loved it! Stonehenge is not far from where I live...it is indeed an awe inspiring part of England! Mo
The is alot of imagery and imagination in this one GW Thankyou for the post Love duncan X
Excellent story expertly written. I enjoyed it very much. regards Ann
not only is it beautiful, but also speckless. 'I hope to achieve such discipline someday.. gr8t
You brought me back to the stories of Merlin the great magician, Arthur and the Knights of the round table... great poem as always!
you made a good story out of a famous tale, with all the rhymes and rhythms which everyone enjoys.