A Rosy Dream Comments

Horrible images Interrupted breathing Melancholic and muddy river Claws of fate Graves of nothingness lanes of skull who are responsible? Powerful poem Thanks Soran, my brother

Hello and Thanks ........ Dear Poet Rose; thank you for your lovely comment, tells us how the experiences in our life are important for the poetry to use them in the right place, then we can look into them and interpreting them in the light of our knowledge and experiences too.. take care, all the best

Another poem of great depth. Powerful and deeply moving. Your great pen can propel the readers to follow the wisdom embedded in this poem A great poem to be treasured forever 10++

A poem of hope, determination and bravery. We shall never allow ourselves to bow in any circumstance, to evilness and darkness. We shall conquer evil at all costs.

Dear poet Valsa George Thank you for sparing your time to read my humble poem, , really your generous commentary encouraging me to write better, kind regards keep writing and stay blessed

The concluding line throws a lot of light on the dream of the poet- indeed a rosy dream- who visualises a time when evil will settle and die in the graves without further chances of resurrection! Well done!

Your poem is too profound for to me to delve into each detail! But I have got the essence of it! Here I see a poet who wields his pen to expose the inequalities of the world and the suffering of the marginalized. The thirsty shivering prairies, I feel is a symbol of the starving majority of the world.

The poem for the sad and sufferings. Touching and thought provoking. Wish it will change the hearts of those who bring sanctions to the countries. Thanks very much for posting. 'I shall not be easy prey between the claws of fate where new grass, unbanned grass will grow inside me. the locusts will eat that grass, '... is my favorite.10+++

Thanks so much for your lovely comments and your great feeling about the poems, I am glad too to be here knowing some brilliant poets such as Susan, I will try to write some genuine poems if I can to give you and all serious poetry readers some excitement and pleasure

I am glad you have joined PoemHunter so that we get to read your powerful poems that demand in depth reading and thought-filled consideration. And your imagery is incomparable! ! ! You are on my favorite poet list so I will keep track of your poetry better- I don't want to miss any!

Henceforth the hands of time shall not devour me - I shall not be easy prey between the claws of fate

Psyche! ! ! ! ! ! ! Into the graves of nothingness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

What a highly imaginative poem! ...and a parting line, like a curtain down, and Evil will settle, forever, into the graves of nothingness beautiful

Part 1/ Dear Dr Shaun Thanks for your lovely comments, Honestly and without exaggeration you are the true poetry lover, your examples are very few nowadays, I have noticed from all your important comments how you are seriously looking into the inner side of the poems and seeing what is going on behind the words and the meanings

Soran another beautifully written and heartachingly presented poem illuminating tragedy. Loved the closing line also 'I shall not be easy prey between the claws of fate'. A superb clarion call to the ignorant to wake up and take stock of the world around them and it's suffering. ! 0++ and added to my food for thought list. Thank you Soran and peace be with you.

Soran yet another beautifully written and imagined heart-felt poem demonstrating tragedy, that seizes any readers attention and gifts from them food for thought and a deafening wake up call to the shallow and ignorant. Love the last line and ' I shall not be easy prey between the claws of fate'. Simply wonderful! 10++ added to my human empathy and soul searching chest. Thank you good Soran and peace be with you.