Sunday, April 27, 2014

A Rose's Generosity Comments

Rating: 4.8

A sack, full of rose
I see them to be for sale
Gives me a feeling
As if brought from a slaughter house.
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 09 October 2014

This is a beautiful poem, Amitava - now a favorite of mine. Great imagery and expression of the life of a rose, it's separate journey. A very meaningful and thoughtful lesson that you have found hidden in the petals of a rose. Thank you for sharing this one, I love it! RoseAnn

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Akhtar Jawad 23 August 2014

A lovely realistic write.

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Srabanti Guha 28 April 2014

What a lovely poem is it! How penetratingly you looked into the matter, we must learn the lesson what those rose tell us..... it's lovely

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Elena Sandu 28 April 2014

Yes indeed we should be ashamed, the flowers, the trees the wind the rivers mountains and the sea all are giving self unconditionally but we only use them never giving back not even a thank. When the nature will be our teacher the world will change. We need to learn to connect the way you connected your feelings to the roses. Great lesson taught, thank you!

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