Thursday, November 12, 2009

**a Rose On His Grave** Comments

Rating: 5.0

A rose on his grave...........

Loved thou in the heart
their veils filled with placid thoughts
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2016

With love and do die one day. Nice work.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2009

'And she is the rose on his grave alive'... This line alone is more than enough to claim more than ten roses from me...thanks Lily Lago...10

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Catrina Heart 24 November 2009

such a lovely poem shared! ! ! well done........

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 20 November 2009

‘…A rose on his grave live alive…’ To say subtly many things. Great treat Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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moon dust 18 November 2009

Wow, this is beautiful!

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Noel Horlanda 17 November 2009

an excellent romanticism poetry, one could imagine a large fresh red rose on a newly dug grave without tombstone.

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Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

I thought the ending was really nice.....

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Lazarus Knix 13 November 2009

It all flows so well....Excellent.

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Ranjit Ravindran 12 November 2009

Beautiful one....liked the last stanza...especially the last two lines. A sweet 10. Ranjit.

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Kranthi Pothineni 12 November 2009

Aww... eloquent piece. Ending is crafted beautifully. Meaningful write.

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Ejaz Khan 12 November 2009

Love always finds ways to survive, a beautiful write! 10

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Ejaz Khan 12 November 2009

Love always finds ways to survive, a beautiful write! 10

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Priyanka Bhowmick 12 November 2009

dats such an exellent piece... wonderful ideas n imagery...good 1..10

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Antonio Liao 12 November 2009

wow! fantastic...especially the last paragraphs....very worth to be display in every museum entrance....long live your poem.....i love it....splendid that flourish in every hearts......you have just capture my solemnity of my thought…God bless you my friend...a 10 +++++

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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