A Rose For My Heart Comments

I really enjoyed this poem very good

A lovely read and a nice present to offer to one's heart...

Light and simple, has a good flow and nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading this.10+++ best regards, jdh

This is a thought provoking poem directing my thoughts inward

very nice poem! made my heart flutter. ;)

a sweet piece..well expressed..

very well done......... :)

chaeming piece. most times i thing the third rhyming word makes it less appealing, than the second or so, but you made it work here.. good

very poetic in approach

Lovely, delightful read! I really enjoyed it. Can smell the roses and feel the nature sublime.

Fine wording with fine rhyme and rhythm! excellent! 10+

Hello friend, Its an honor being invited to read your poem. How nice to hear and read those wonderfully interwoven poem of its quality making me feel near to my beloved nature. a rate of 10++++. Please read my poem and do comments and rating too to help me become a great poem like you and for that, thanks much

Very lovely and smooth. Great poem.

I dont remember when I last read something so silky, beautiful and true........ that's a masterpiece there.. I am kind of jealous though!

Commendable work, Obinna. The piece has moves mellifluously throughout. Imagework & metaphoric play ties together nicely...One suggestion, that you take a look at all your one stanza works...and consider employing couplet stanzaic structure to those that may enable the flow of the work to flow even better.Also, believe it or not...the aesthetics of a poem's structure comes into the Reader's mind & has a direct affect on how they read the poem versus how you wanted them to, whether they realise it or not.....Otherwise...Job Well Done. FjR

its a very beautiful poem.

Wow! That was a beautiful poem. I love the emotion you put in it.

a beautiful poem of love..nicely penned..grace

its so romantic.i love it.

this is so nice...you have extraordinary ideas i really like your poetry well done at all luwi