Thursday, September 18, 2014

A Rose Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

After a fine mild rain,
I walked on the pavements,
Of a garden of flowers,
Aftershocks of showers,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Luz Hanaii 10 September 2018

Aw! so sweet, I too love to put flowers between the pages of a book.

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Khalida Bano Ali 15 May 2018

Such a great poem on beauty and love.

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Khalid Saifullah 04 November 2017

What a lovely poem...........................................................................

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Hazel Durham 16 March 2015

Beauty painted with your inspired lines that flow from all the love in your heart!

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Heather Wilkins 16 October 2014

a beautiful rose poem great imagination

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Salini Nair 20 September 2014

imagination beyond imagination...................................a lovely rose flower

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Abhipsa Tripathy 20 September 2014

wow! its a very nice & imaginative poem on a lovely beautiful pink rose...............

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 September 2014

lovely nice poem flowery-showery heart touching well chosen words thank you

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Roseann Shawiak 18 September 2014

Absolutely amazing poem Akhtar! Such well-defined imagery with a metered rhythm, I can only think to say how priceless and meaningful this poem is to me, Akhtar. Wow! Thank you for sharing it with us. RoseAnn

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 September 2014

I have no words to comment on this lovely poem. It's great.

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Ramesh Rai 18 September 2014

Now the flower has dried, But still kept, In the book of love, When I open this book, My soul smiles, My love smiles, And the dry petals, Still smile, Like fresh shy bud. common in nature

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Valsa George 18 September 2014

You are soaring higher and higher on the wings of imagination! Enjoyed your 'escapade', rather your dalliance with this rose beauty! Beautiful!

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