Monday, October 13, 2008

A Rose, A Car Comments

Rating: 5.0

The simple joys of life are nicer
A rose, a rain or a river
They're natural thus beautiful
Uncorrupted, pristine, eternal
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Chitra - 24 May 2009

natural pristine beauty V/s the transitory aritifical life... your lines are so intense they want the first type of happiness to sustain but in today's mechanized times the latter seems to come out as a winner what an irony

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 May 2009

Beauty is nature, but in this age we love artificials. Nice poem.

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Eyan Desir 27 April 2009

Complex write poem Good one

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

the natural 'good's and the artficial evils...good comparison here, Gargi...using nice imageries...lovely...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

A joyful poem. Lovely. 10+

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