Monday, November 14, 2016

A Rose Comments

Rating: 4.7

I'm a white rose pure and innocent
Pluck me not for your momentary pleasures
Crush me not to be found after years
In the books among the shelves
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Sandra Feldman 20 June 2025

This poem is so deeply beautiful and emotional, it brought tears to my eyes. thank you for this Gem! star favorite.

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This poem stands elevated to position #58 in the list of Best Poems Of Members. Actually the poem deserved to be placed within the Top Ten poems. I hope PoemHunter will recognise the real talent sooner or later..

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viacheslav kupriyanov 14 July 2024

Could you translate this my poem into, Urdu? SINGING LESSON Man invented the cage before inventing wings In cages the winged sing of the freedom of flight Before the cages the wingless sing of the justice of cages Translated from Russian by Francis R.Jones

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An Urdu translation of the poem is already published on PoemHunter in 2018. The translation is done by talented Urdu poet Ravi Kopra

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This lovely poem by Aarzoo ranks number Four in the Best Poems of Member Poets. Congratulations to Aarzoo. This beautiful piece truly deserves the recognition. I am very happy that finally PoemHunter chose to recognise real talent.

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Today this poem is at 86. From #07 to #86 in a matter of days! Well done PoemHunter

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Pity! This marvellous poem is placed at rank number #86 in the Best Poems of Members! From position no 08 to 86. I feel disillusioned at the irresponsible behaviour of ph admin

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This lovely poem is ranked at #08 in the list of Best Poems of Member Poets today. A rank it truly deserves! Finally, PoemHunter has accorded it the place it deserves. Thank you, PoemHunter. And Congratulations, Poet Aarzoo.

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Aarzoo Mehek 30 January 2024

I thank you for appreciating and supporting my work. Thank you for such beautiful feedback. It gives immense joys to the writers to write more and share it with our well wishers.

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Today this beautiful poem is ranked at #29 in the Best Poems of Members. It deserves to be ranked higher. But, so far so good

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Indira Renganathan 05 October 2023

No one wants to lose her or his freedom in this world...good metaphor and good words through a white rose...liked

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Soran M. H 25 September 2023

I am a pure and innocent white rose It tells us that beauty is not enough to feel the real moments of life without freedom. A beautiful text, well done Feeling the ecstasy of freedom

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Tom Allport 21 September 2023

Freedom is nature's gift for all living things, well penned

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When the poet said "A thing of beauty is a joy for ever", it was about this marvellous poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 July 2023

A rose is a rose...I enormously admire this wonderful poem

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Congratulations, Aarzoo. This poem ranks #86 in the Best Poems of Members today. Deserves a better placing. But all the best.

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Rob Lamberton 26 March 2023

It is a hard thing to want to be so close to someone who's need for freedom seems to take them everywhere else but bye your side but what a joy when that is where they choose to shine their colors!

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 03 February 2023

A wonderful composition...loved it

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2023

5 stars. But, in your PoemHunter bio, I think you want to type PoemHunter, not Poetry Hunter. : )

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2023

I like it. Yeah, being crushed between book pages is so boring! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't pick me; just take a picture/photo. bri : )

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Nabakishore Dash 23 January 2023

Extremely heart touching poem Aarzooji.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 20 January 2023

Nice metaphor. Every life is a rose. Let it live free till its natural end. Good poem, Aarzoo

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