A Rootless Existence Comments

This life is nothing But a wakeful dream I was predisposed to live Then Why am I rebellious To my default operating system I keep on customizing My intrinsic programming With an artificial intelligence Errors and bloopers And what I get in the end Is nothing but A rootless existence Just brilliant in a rootfull kind of way.. only those who haven't lost their roots can say.. ..Simply.....beautiful beyond words...John

A deeply profound poem in which one's intrinsic thoughts have been written with emotional restrainst.

Truly mind provoking..revealing what was once been so blind within... Wonderful poem..truly a piece of art!

Great Read. I loved it! It made me smile.

This life is nothing But a wakeful dream I was predisposed to live Then............................................. it is the crux of quest from time immemorial living gets baffled by the life by the appocalypse it is the rainbow over the blue sky in time and space queries when all unanswered onto the last dregs of rain.............wonderful verse by the living slowly sprucing the skin of life and again on decline, yet introspective, history repeats on and on the body of eternal stream slithering to the void of vastness, great write,10++++, thanks for sharing

Pregnant with profoundity.Wonderfully written! 10/10

uff bhai what a write....the first stanza its amazingly beautiful and strong, i dont have the words to explain, you have shown everything in this marvellous write, the realities with the mixture of sweet and bitterness...a very power write with deep thoughts...bravo, bravo....thanks for sharing 10++++++ nd A++++ rgds asif

A poem, which, with deliberation, paints the thoughts of reality of existence, and things we think we do, or we do! Well done.

nice write all that i can say is that u r really a vry good poet as i always used to say this but u really r wel done Maryam

Indeed, powerful eloquence! ! A picture you painted here which come in people's mind. ....things let people to think this way. I agree with Sulaiman that there is a root. 10+++

very thoughtful i love how it moves along.. Very peacefully.. Great write Krista

a nice and different and a well thought poem. words are nice and theme is goo too.

Kamran, This is toooooooooooooo difficult for me to understand dear. I have to perform postmortem on every line here. You are a very intelligent poet and I have yet to reach your level of perception. So what comment can I give you except that all that you have written is simply the best.---Keep up your good work May God Bless you-- is my sincerest prayer for you. regards anju ++++++++++10

hmmmmmmm...well i need to read this again maybe in the morning and then.......dwell on it........good write.........well done

great hauting philosophy. I need to read it again and again to digest. So many beautiful lines with highly touching thoughts..............10++++++++++++++

Your root is your manner, your talk, your character and your look........when your not angry.Thats your root! ! ! !

good philosophical piece...life, in one sense, is meaningless...and this very knowledge makes life attractively challenging, worthy to live...pre-programmed, we are pushed out here, Kamran...the imageries you build in this poem support very well its insightful character...10+

A rootless existence Mocking at reasons and intellegence What is the use of this pompous play this grand display If we have to merge one day in a merciless clay. Good Work. But so melanocholic.