Tuesday, June 13, 2017

A Room Without A View. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've turned my house
into my castle of doom
wherever you may turn
seems I've run out of room.
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Dee Corpolongo
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Valsa George 20 June 2017

When relationships become strained or mind is annoyed for one reason or the other, we plunge into a state of confusion....and feel confined within walls....! Such thoughts are possible in life....! But those ups and downs come and go....! Letting them go and waiting for things to clear up is all we can do. The suffocation of a confused mind is delineated beautifully well....! (10)

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Dee Corpolongo 20 June 2017

Thank you so very much Valsa....you definitely read it well....and I think so highly of your opinion!

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Dear poet, Your poem gives so many inner feelings. between couples or close relations.. etc.. different thinking persons under one roof... between living human being a departed soul...

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Dee Corpolongo 20 June 2017

Thank you for seeing past the lines....I appreciate it...and for reading my poem.

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