On such a cloudy day why you are far away?
Lightning is writing in sky what I want to say
The cloudy sky is like my gloomy face
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Cast away your dull moods and look up with hope and optimism, for you are a gifted person! A great poem! !
You struggle a bit with the English. I can't imagine how difficult it must be to write a poem in another language. Poetry particularly. I wish I could read you in Bengali. Your ideas are good and full of imagination.