Wednesday, May 25, 2016

A Romantic Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shall I just stand and let the eyes drink,
The wine in the petals is shocking pink,
Inhale your aroma and watch your dance,
Join naughty winds in a rainy romance,
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Luz Hanaii 30 April 2018

Beautifully crafted, with such a nice flow and good choice of soft sounding words.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 May 2016

If the rose could; it will give you a kiss! ! Thank you sir-10

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M Asim Nehal 26 May 2016

Romanticism in air, rose is the perfect symbol of love and romance, Nicely written, Janab,10+++

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Kelly Kurt 25 May 2016

A lovely poem. The essence of the rose

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