Friday, December 29, 2006

A Romantic Night Comments

Rating: 4.8

You come in and sit down while looking around
I tell you don’t be afraid just relax for this is your night
I’ve prepared all day for this one perfect night
Topped with music, food, wine and a flickering candle light
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Tears From A Soldiers Eyes
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Kita Jackson 11 May 2016

This is my favorite

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Emma Woods 16 August 2008

wow! ! this is - no joke - one of the best poems I have ever read - it's so elegantly beautiful and so passionate - so in the moment of heat - explaining everything that people have tried so hard to find words for - added to my faves! !

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Denise F. 08 August 2007

WOW..lol...this is a very powerful and passionate poem..tastefully written, indeed..thank you for sharing it.. Denise

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Claire Jones 03 August 2007

This is amazing, very hot and powerful. You have alot of talent and passion. CJ

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Joy Vanderhelm 03 February 2007

Now this is a poem! Whew! And a breathless undertaking, a fresh respect to such a wonderous thing as a romantic night. Well written and with the raw power and emotion so well expressed, it's a wonder my mouth hasn't gone dry with anticipation. Well done.

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Kelly Hanson 02 January 2007

got my pulse rate up there! ! ! very nicely done, daniel... 'ready for mines' is such perfect use of ebonics (hommieghettospeak) hope to see more of that technique.

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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

This poem was well written, and with much thought, and feeling. I have to say reading it left no stone unturned.....and was breath-taking and I must say left me speechless in some respect. A very good write for a Romantic Night....

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Patricia Gale 29 December 2006

A romantic night indeed, romance still lives as shown with passionate write.

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