A Romance In The Night Sky. Comments
Tempered by the friction, of each others loneliness.
Brightly wooed, in our own glad glorious way.
We chasing each other, along those milky ways.
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With a little editing and tidying up the odd apostrophe and 'missing' words, this could be a nice poem. It's got potential.
Charming poem about a love affair in the sky. I especially like the phrase 'Love stars.' Consider making it a hyphenated word: love-stars, though it's fine just the way it is. Nice work. Cheers.
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7/29/2025 2:03:18 AM # 1.0.0
An insightful, well articulated poem; written in heightened language. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.