Saturday, September 1, 2007

A Road Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Other passers-by
come,
from where we used to come,
and go into the night.
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Muhammad Hesham
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emotional girl 14 September 2007

well... i liked that, a very compelling poem... keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! u can read mine if u want.... lots of love, emo girl

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Santana Marasco 06 September 2007

A very nice poem, I love the way you link each verse, a thoughtful read. Regards, Giovanna.

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Sandra Fowler 05 September 2007

Excellent title. Life is indeed a mixture of light and shadows. Beautiful work, muhammad Kindest regards, Sandra

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Blue angel Florida 01 September 2007

On a Road Without You, Muhammad, Lovely footfall to face reality with the shadow of memory.

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