A River Comments

A lake gathering fresh waters of wisdom from the flow of your river. Mesmerized, captured, infatuated. I want to drink you, because, a lake refuses no river. hi, this is a gifted poem, nice to keep in heart for ever, joyce you done it

The idea is excellent. And the words too...Nice poem Anjana

I once had an idea similar to this, but I just could not get it out on paper to save my life! Your version is excellent! Better than I would have done.

Reminds of the book 'Siddhartha.' Nice poem.

Now this is a class act, I have really enjoyed this one, thankyou for sharing your art, Love Duncan

I agree with all the comments you have already had re this poem. Super work. Looking forward to reading your poetry now I have discovered you. Cheers! Philippa

Thank you both so much, nice to meet you Cecil. Joyce

I enjoyed reading this poem you have a unique vision of nature with wonderful descriptive images.

Phillip thank you so much.. I actually have a drawing that goes with this but can't post it here. Glad you liked it without the drawing.. and that you understood my meaning. Joyce

Dear Joyce, You express the truth, where we receive our wisdom, our life, the source of great waters is found in each stream that enters us. Thanks for this blessing. Phillip