A river of the will,
Plays in my mind.
I call her to come out,
But she stays behind.
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Never underestimate the power of the will! ! Thanks for the reminder!
What a beautiful poem! This poem flows like a murmuring river... beautifully written....Top score
Outstanding poem, I quote my fav lines: I sit by the window, It starts raining outside, My room gathers shadow. I think, where's my will? She isn't in the sky-
Then go back to the river, To be again the cloud, To flash with the thunder, To roar aloud! A beautiful rendition of reincarnation, if you believe.
Dear Neela, such a wonderful poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen...........10++++++++++
congratulations on poem of the day, this is a lovely poem
Congratulations on your beautiful piece... I sat and read it, as the rain fell in my little lakeside town on Long Island (New York) and realized how the rain washes us all.... PEACE.
Enjoyed heart felt yearning, as if I were standing in the rain myself... thank you for sharing. (I have a piece with the same title) thumbs up to you Neely.
Lovely poem, with fresh use of words and point of view... enjoyed this...
I consider this a perfect poem! ! ! Well deserved as poem of day after day after day! ! ! This is what poetry is all about to me! Be proud! ! !
Race! To embrace the truth; Giving you cool brace! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
It is chosen again as the Poem of the Day! Such a lovely poem.It is the power of love, power of creation that lies inside us that gathers like a cloud and all of sudden fall like rain. - - Congratulations for Poem of the Day!
An imaginative poem that flows and twists into a prolonged sound? .....well penned Neela
a river in mind pensive mood flies like elf sits by window whispers but it does not close to poet..../// lovely poem
Revisited. Congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
very beautiful imaginary poem. congratulations for POD title.
Congratulations.....for your sweet river of will and it's permanent form of blissfulness....
Wonderful poem.