Saturday, May 26, 2012

A River Of The Will Comments

Rating: 4.7

A river of the will,
Plays in my mind.
I call her to come out,
But she stays behind.
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Neela Nath Das
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Thomas Case 23 October 2023

Wonderful poem.

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Thomas Case 17 October 2023

Powerful poem, great job.

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Rob Lamberton 01 December 2022

Never underestimate the power of the will! ! Thanks for the reminder!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 August 2021

What a beautiful poem! This poem flows like a murmuring river... beautifully written....Top score

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M Asim Nehal 02 December 2018

Outstanding poem, I quote my fav lines: I sit by the window, It starts raining outside, My room gathers shadow. I think, where's my will? She isn't in the sky-

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Amir Marandi 02 December 2018

Then go back to the river, To be again the cloud, To flash with the thunder, To roar aloud! A beautiful rendition of reincarnation, if you believe.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2018

Dear Neela, such a wonderful poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen...........10++++++++++

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Lyn Paul 02 December 2018

A lovely write that captures the reader.

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Matthew Holloway 02 December 2018

congratulations on poem of the day, this is a lovely poem

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Susan Lacovara 02 December 2018

Congratulations on your beautiful piece... I sat and read it, as the rain fell in my little lakeside town on Long Island (New York) and realized how the rain washes us all.... PEACE.

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Butch Decatoria 02 December 2018

Enjoyed heart felt yearning, as if I were standing in the rain myself... thank you for sharing. (I have a piece with the same title) thumbs up to you Neely.

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Harley White 02 December 2018

Lovely poem, with fresh use of words and point of view... enjoyed this...

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Bill Cantrell 02 December 2018

I consider this a perfect poem! ! ! Well deserved as poem of day after day after day! ! ! This is what poetry is all about to me! Be proud! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 December 2018

Race! To embrace the truth; Giving you cool brace! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 02 December 2018

It is chosen again as the Poem of the Day! Such a lovely poem.It is the power of love, power of creation that lies inside us that gathers like a cloud and all of sudden fall like rain. - - Congratulations for Poem of the Day!

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Tom Allport 02 December 2018

An imaginative poem that flows and twists into a prolonged sound? .....well penned Neela

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 December 2018

a river in mind pensive mood flies like elf sits by window whispers but it does not close to poet..../// lovely poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2018

Revisited. Congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Hassan Hayati 02 December 2018

very beautiful imaginary poem. congratulations for POD title.

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Prabir Gayen 02 December 2018

Congratulations.....for your sweet river of will and it's permanent form of blissfulness....

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