Sunday, January 18, 2009

A River Flows Comments

Rating: 2.8

Where does the river flow
if not to you?

How deep its depths
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Lonnie Hicks
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 October 2015

Verily, true love ever flows like an everflowing river

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Ken E Hall 26 March 2015

Original look at oceans of love and it flows so well for the reader to enjoy...how broad is the river bank seals the poem for me...regards

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Meggie Gultiano 21 February 2009

i love the flow of your river.it is beautiful.A pleasure to read Hugs, Meggie

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Vaibhav Pandey 31 January 2009

a different style.....I liked the way you started in the form of questions..............last stanza is excellent.

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Sreelekha Premjit 27 January 2009

I enjoyed reading this poem. I hope the river flows carrying your muse to me so that I can write better.

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Jim Norausky 26 January 2009

This is a very interesting poem with a lot of meaning. I like it. Jim

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Lonnie Hicks

Lonnie Hicks

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