Tuesday, June 10, 2008

A River Flows Back Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the country hall of Lescovac
Echoe the pangs of past,
The young Roma lads
Sing their way
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Harish k. Thakur
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Marieta Maglas 27 August 2009

a wonderful oxymoron and metaphor at the same time: ''A deep voice surfaces From the unknown corner And rips apart The vale of silence I have worn.'' and an excellent poem..............10++++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 August 2009

A semi-philosophical poem with deep contents and sad tone. Poetically sublimed and very well written in mild verbiage to ease pain. The title is very catchy and compatible with the contents of the poem, very meaningful indeed..............10/10. Regards Naseer

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 15 November 2008

THAT WAS HARD HITTING REALITY... AND U PORTRAYED IT WELL WITH UR WORDS...

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Seema Chowdhury 12 October 2008

such a lovely poem with thought provoking phrases.

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Richa Dhodi 08 October 2008

' Swagger over the pulsating bellies' i like this line.. Good imagination.. thanks for sharing

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Nikki Lusifer 19 June 2008

wow thats a really nice poem i like alot keep on writing

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008

There is a talent for writing here that is apparent to any reader. This is not realy a poem, though the form would indicate that. The writer is so skilled, however, that the reader may not notice this. The descriptive use of the written word is an artistic talent and this writing fits more easily in that realm. GW62

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Harish K. Thakur 18 May 2015

THNAX GREENWOLF

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Malini Kadir 10 June 2008

depth in thoughts reflect.....keep writing.....

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Subbaraman N V 10 June 2008

Unfortunate! A good write. Thanks for sharing.

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