In the country hall of Lescovac
Echoe the pangs of past,
The young Roma lads
Sing their way
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A semi-philosophical poem with deep contents and sad tone. Poetically sublimed and very well written in mild verbiage to ease pain. The title is very catchy and compatible with the contents of the poem, very meaningful indeed..............10/10. Regards Naseer
THAT WAS HARD HITTING REALITY... AND U PORTRAYED IT WELL WITH UR WORDS...
' Swagger over the pulsating bellies' i like this line.. Good imagination.. thanks for sharing
There is a talent for writing here that is apparent to any reader. This is not realy a poem, though the form would indicate that. The writer is so skilled, however, that the reader may not notice this. The descriptive use of the written word is an artistic talent and this writing fits more easily in that realm. GW62
a wonderful oxymoron and metaphor at the same time: ''A deep voice surfaces From the unknown corner And rips apart The vale of silence I have worn.'' and an excellent poem..............10++++