A River Flows Back Comments

a wonderful oxymoron and metaphor at the same time: ''A deep voice surfaces From the unknown corner And rips apart The vale of silence I have worn.'' and an excellent poem..............10++++

A semi-philosophical poem with deep contents and sad tone. Poetically sublimed and very well written in mild verbiage to ease pain. The title is very catchy and compatible with the contents of the poem, very meaningful indeed..............10/10. Regards Naseer

THAT WAS HARD HITTING REALITY... AND U PORTRAYED IT WELL WITH UR WORDS...

such a lovely poem with thought provoking phrases.

' Swagger over the pulsating bellies' i like this line.. Good imagination.. thanks for sharing

wow thats a really nice poem i like alot keep on writing

There is a talent for writing here that is apparent to any reader. This is not realy a poem, though the form would indicate that. The writer is so skilled, however, that the reader may not notice this. The descriptive use of the written word is an artistic talent and this writing fits more easily in that realm. GW62

depth in thoughts reflect.....keep writing.....

Unfortunate! A good write. Thanks for sharing.