Friday, January 20, 2023

A River Flows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flood me with your love
Without the river of life I would wither
Flood me for I am dry
I am withered
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Rob Lamberton
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 June 2024

Bravo my dear Enjoyed it much Rob! ! !

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 23 January 2023

May new attractive green words sprout on your poem stem

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Nosheen Irfan 22 January 2023

Lovely plea! Don't we all need it? You have spoken for us all. Bravo!

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Rob Lamberton 22 January 2023

You are very gracious Nosheen! Thank you!

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Pallab Chaudhury 21 January 2023

Like river, love is life sustaining....well depicted one... Congrats!

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Nabakishore Dash 21 January 2023

Extremely nice words for the river water which keeps our lives run.

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Susan Williams 21 January 2023

this poem reveals the magic of a line repeated! ! ! great use of a poetic tool

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 January 2023

Love heals all wound. A magical compassionate heart can do the magic of reviving a withering heart. Beautiful poem.

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