Flood me with your love
Without the river of life I would wither
Flood me for I am dry
I am withered
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Lovely plea! Don't we all need it? You have spoken for us all. Bravo!
Like river, love is life sustaining....well depicted one... Congrats!
Extremely nice words for the river water which keeps our lives run.
this poem reveals the magic of a line repeated! ! ! great use of a poetic tool
Love heals all wound. A magical compassionate heart can do the magic of reviving a withering heart. Beautiful poem.
Bravo my dear Enjoyed it much Rob! ! !