# A Rise And Fall Of Humanity [india's Freedom] A Double Etheree Poem Comments

A great heart touching poem......................10

Very timely and meaningful. 10+

Dear Samanyan, Thanks for your invite to read and rate this poem. Nicely presented both in form and content. Good write always brings good marks so A10 Rajkumar (My comments are also in ten syllable counts)

India's freedom was brought through ahimsa but after sixty years of India's freedom, the foundation of Ahimsa and humanity are no more existent.Violence is very much prevalent in the country. Very thought provoking, nicely written poem.

What a cool form for a poem; and you have certainly done justice here; both to the form and to the poem.

this is the perfect form for this powerful and beautiful poem....and hopefully like the catterpillar/butterfly....change is always possible for the better.....bring back Ghandi, please!

this is such a nice and thought provoking poem. thanks for sharing. all great leaders have left and afterwards we have forgotton their lesson and exapmles of life. i wish we can change ourselves and become honest and brave.

sad sad truth expressed here...well composed etheree

You’ve chosen the double etheree (double tetractys) for a good theme…and done justice to it. Interestingly, this is some significant coincidence that I happen to read this during the birth month of the great soul. # 10.

Brilliant. Not just because of the form but also because Mahatma Gandhi is someone I am devoted to.10.

I like to read philosophy on all sorts of things but this inspired me to look up on Gandhi, I don't know if he was a 'philosopher' but I'm sure had he some things to say. First, the format is amazing, the third time I read it was just to count the syllables, haha. I do not know much of India but it's sad to know that even a country founded on peace has a downfall. Best of wishes to you and your country. 10

wow! I like the format and I like the content 10 out of ten. I'm sure the poem would inspire others to try this format. thanks

WoW...Creative form...Well said..Constructive thought. Deserves 10+++++++

I read Indira's comment and I began to cry. My dearest flower don't you know that the whole world was at war with each other when Ghandi first went on his many fasts. It's that the world is in such terrible termoil that we need a non voilent uprising not only in India but in the world.

Though I lack very much in grammar about this etheree poetry I still can appreciate your writing and feel your hurt heart(mine too) ..but what is the use..? the whole world is marching on in this kind of track only...so, what is the use of telling others that my mother is bad or my family is bad..? so a humble request..try to treasure out all salient features of Mother Bhaarat, be it present or past...you tell me if I'm right...thank you

very well written poem....: -) ....1 ov my favourtes......10

Very powerful and evocative. I can feel your pain.10/10 Warm regards, Sandra

' A Rise And Fall Of Humanity' your poem describes freedom through non violence... later freedom (humanity) becomes violent to protected itself.. ironic?

Same is the story on my side of the wall. Jinnah's Pakistan has turned into the same situation even worse than you have described. Regards Naseer

AN enchanting dynamic patriotic poem that is.