Monday, September 22, 2014

A Ripple's Life Comments

Rating: 4.3

A mysterious crave entwined the air
in that moment all words were mess
when river breeze frolicked with her hair
sun pinked rose smeared her face!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 22 September 2014

A beautiful moment, evanescent as a bubble..... Though you had wished to tell so much to her, nothing could be communicated as the moment fleeted past in the glimmer of a second! Sweet write!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 September 2014

A sublime winsome poem on euphoric love. The causerina tree, wow. Kudos. So nice to read u again.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 22 September 2014

Feelings of love so delicately expressed.......a very well composed piece......I liked it much

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 September 2014

Nice poem a ripple's life was all it got no rewind could be no return! thank you

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