A Ripe Persimmon Comments

Like diplomatic immunity cross country visa…poetic pass port have entry into your bosom and readers too … ‘Don't you fidget to find out to whom you get married? ’ ~ Known but just romancing...a type of sweet courtship [lolol] …excellently worded… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

you make spring and summer be stretched with lifting heat- piling-up-plate to heaven an interesting contrast of line and taste throughout the poem :)

Puts forth a point of view well