Thursday, October 15, 2009

A Riot Of Colours! Comments

Rating: 3.9

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Green leaves
gazing at red flowers
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 17 October 2009

Nalini, The implicit message of my poem is the basic equality of the various races of the Homo sapiens. Regarding the superior and inferiority complexes, what I feel is, they are the two sides of the same coin, for they have to do with the levels of confidence. Confidence (not over-confidence) coupled with a little love and understanding, and diffidence if sublimated to humility…would be positive and infectious virtues. This is my humble perception.

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Anusha Subramanian 17 October 2009

Lovely chosen words.. Wonderful poem.. A great write.. :)

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Nalini Hebbar 16 October 2009

a reminder for the oneness of the human race...feeling superior is forgiveable ...attribute it to human weakness...but unforgivable is a feeling of Inferiority...no human being should punish themselves in this manner...regards

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

This is an amazing poem... Very well crafted..

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Gold Fish 15 October 2009

This poem is a fresh foray into the racial/ethnicity issues that have long plagued society. The author utilizes tactful language, creative botanical analogies and cultural knowledge to highlight a fundamental problem that may never be fully resolved. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for sharing. 10+

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 October 2009

a lovely conversation between the colors of the objects...done very well..the jealousy and who is bigger stands out in this poem...and that is a 'grey' shade..you could write one in which these compliment each other...a great read...10

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

lovely words chosen carefully

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Obinna Eruchie 15 October 2009

You gave those plants the psychological and racial characteristics of the human race represented by their colours.

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Hyderabad, AP, India
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