She found his ring
the other day
where she had put it
safe, away.
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Memories bought out to the light and then we reminisce about it if just for a little while. Brings some of the joys of love back to us. Good.
Very poignant poem. A saddened reality of life and you have etched it's picture in my mind. Definitely like your style. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Such beautiful language on such a said subject. This was a poignant delight to read. I especially liked 'and now his home was in her heart.' 10. Hugs Anna xxx
Dear CJ, This is a tender and touching poem on the aftermath of loss, and how we honor the one we loved and how those memories can trigger tears of healing, because the wound must be reopened with each look at that token and hopefully, the healing will make the heart stronger and more resilient. A lovely and heartfelt poem. With warm regards, Hugh
Beautiful, tender...and so deeply sad. Lovely writing. Have an 8. With warmth, Gina.
Beautifully written, you have expressed the the sorrow at the loss of a spouse most profoundly