Sunday, January 27, 2008

A Ring Of Gold? Comments

Rating: 5.0

He saw a glint in the insubstantial mist
as through the forest he walked with stick
with swirlings of the night of old
still resting on ivy covered boughs
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David Taylor
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Original Unknown Girl 21 April 2008

What a beautiful story told here David, it gives hope. HG: -) xx

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Theresa Moore 03 February 2008

An excellent poem… thought provoking.

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Duncan Wyllie 02 February 2008

{ SPEECHLESS }...............................

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David Harris 29 January 2008

David, I liked this, kept me reading from top to bottom. Like the mystery to it, especially as I like mysteries myself. Top marks without a doubt, just wish I could more. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Ernestine Northover 27 January 2008

How spellbinding David, an ethereal write leaving one with a feeling of unfinished business. Mysterious stuff. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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David Taylor

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