When you say matrix
I don't think of Keanu Reeves
Baldheaded and pale
Or about the machines
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This is quite profound, Marton and cleverly worked out - riddle is right. You're right too about living life in the 'real' rather than vicariously via the 'virtual world'. May I point out a couple of tiny mistakes you might like to correct? 'Machines' in line 3 and 'in themselves' in line 10. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
I enjoyed this poem, I will read more