Tuesday, August 4, 2009

A Riddle With Words Comments

Rating: 3.2

When you say matrix
I don't think of Keanu Reeves
Baldheaded and pale
Or about the machines
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Marton Dezso
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 17 October 2009

I enjoyed this poem, I will read more

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Alison Cassidy 13 August 2009

This is quite profound, Marton and cleverly worked out - riddle is right. You're right too about living life in the 'real' rather than vicariously via the 'virtual world'. May I point out a couple of tiny mistakes you might like to correct? 'Machines' in line 3 and 'in themselves' in line 10. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Meggie Gultiano 04 August 2009

well crafted piece..A pleasure to read.

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