Tuesday, August 29, 2023

A Rhymed And Metered Children's Poem.... Comments

Rating: 4.0

Gather 'round, Children, and Bri shall tell you a tale...
about a cat which, since birth, had no hair on its tail.
Oh, it HAD a tail, but it was a tail like that on a snake,
and no hair did the cat's tail have, but still it did shake.
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COMMENTS
Kingsley Egbukole 01 September 2023

Bri my friend, you have the gift of making good sense from little things with lots of good humour. A beautiful poem worth reading many times.

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Bri Edwards 01 September 2023

[[ CONT. ]] **** 'woe is me interjection Used to show that the speaker feels distress or misery; often used humorously.'

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Bri Edwards 01 September 2023

READERS, MY POEM IS LONGER NOW AND COMPLETE, BUT.................PH IS 'TAKING ITS TIME' OR....SOMETHING ELSE IS KEEPING ME FROM SUCCESSFULLY EDITING THE POEM TO ADD THE REST OF THE STANZAS. 'WOE IS ME! ' ****...AND MAYBE SOME OF YOU? ? ? bri ;) [[ CONT. ]])

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Jim McGill 29 August 2023

Hope it ends well for the cat. My poems about cats never end well—for the cat!

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 August 2023

Nice one. Very interesting. Loved it.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 29 August 2023

Nice try, Bri, but better luck next time. This poem has no meter, but it DOES have RHYME!

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