A Rhyme Of Passion Comments
I see you and my palms begin to sweat.
My mouth grows drier with each breath I take.
My knees begin to quiver and I say the darndest things,
which my mouth can’t stop, and my heart begins to quake.
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Great rhyme, Christine. There is certainly passion in your writing... and plenty to love! Brian
Beautiful and in the style of writing I particularly like, creates good images.
Hi! Christine: Thanks for imput, I have many Haiku's thought Id post a few getting lots and lots of comments, my Haiku California Coast just past 506 hits since posting I am overwhelmed. Your poem takes me back when I had my first crush. I was shaking so much, I could not keep my feet steady on the gas petal, in my ole motel A Ford. thanks for the memorie charles garcia
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7/28/2025 3:16:44 AM # 1.0.0
I love the last stanza! It boost up the theme...10+++++