Friday, March 13, 2009

A Rhyme Of A Mariner Comments

Rating: 3.4

O bluish heaven!
where I put my love
when you waves
my fragile fate
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Juan Carlos Abeti 23 May 2009

good life of the mariner, so many places to see, sorrounded by the majestic sea....

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 May 2009

The Mariner is gifted with such a beautiful environment while he sails on and on.

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Ramesh T A 21 May 2009

Nice poem to read! It reminds me of Coleridge's Ancient Mariner!

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Anthony Foster 17 May 2009

Thanx Ahmad a beautiful discription of my mistress.10

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Hang on to your dreams no matter how difficult they may seem and then realise and appreciate their importance.Another ten from me.You are very philosophical....

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Ravi A 24 March 2009

A poem with a good theme, well written.

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Seema Chowdhury 23 March 2009

nice poem different from other poems.

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Lynda Robson 17 March 2009

Well woven tale of the sea, thanks, 10 Lynda x

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Christina Phan 15 March 2009

i luv this one too well done

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Louis Rams 14 March 2009

being a past mariner i could see.all the meaning you send. with the ocean beating against the shore, like true love ever more.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 March 2009

The pearl part, sort of like a silver lining to every cloud.

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 14 March 2009

You have great art for expressing things in ways that are different and that is good to have. Nice write.

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Ben Gieske 14 March 2009

Very interesting combination with a lot of pictures that involve the senses. Really stirs up the imagination.

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Merna Ibrahim 14 March 2009

What a vivid mariner, beautiful explanation to a beautiful scene! ! Well written Merna

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Rajaram Ramachandran 14 March 2009

Another musical piece of yours in the name of Rhyme of a Mariner

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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