Wednesday, November 21, 2012

A Rhyme Comments

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Santa Clause loves a bit of banter
he goes on a horse and tells it go and canter
He loves himself,
he flicks his hair,
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Asif Andalib 22 November 2012

Lovely write on Santa. However I have a suggetion you can rewrite the last stanza as given below He is living the dream, Girls think he is icecream He loves each and everyone he is a legend for fun.

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Anita Sehgal 22 November 2012

a good one for santa.. enjoyed

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