Thursday, September 18, 2014

A Retrospect Comments

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A retrospect
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Fair may look the spring
Fair may look the sun
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Salini Nair 20 September 2014

Fair may look the spring Fair may look the sun Fair may look the moon But far away from once..................a nostalgic feel

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Valsa George 19 September 2014

Here you seem to feel sad over a relationship that has lost its former warmth! Thin words and smiles occasionally dropped have lost their former fervour! A poem that suggests so much about a friendship or relationship that has cooled down and has become almost formal! Enjoyed, Deepak!

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Gajanan Mishra 18 September 2014

embracing as friend, good one, thanks,

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