Monday, June 29, 2009

A Resting Place Comments

Rating: 5.0

This world does not deserve you,
nor will it be
the place where,
I to earth let them lay you.
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Gert Strydom
sea
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Sara Tehrani 04 January 2010

Has a traditional poetic style to it that I like. strong choice of vocabulary with beautiful rythem. :)

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Sara Tehrani 04 January 2010

Has a traditional poetic style to it that I like. strong choice of vocabulary with beautiful rythem. :)

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beautiful poem, poetically expressed

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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