Tuesday, December 13, 2005

A Rest From Writing Comments

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Not one word is worth
the birth upon the paper.
Not one line feels fine
like a quick fix i split,
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A. Todd. Perkins 11 April 2006

Great imagery, I feel the same way sometimes. Like your waiting for the dealer to return with the fix all, so you can function. Writing is functioning, and sometimes the dealer takes forever it seems to return, with the fix. Great Work!

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Joy Vanderhelm 01 January 2006

Muses can be so fickle and, indeed, somewhat heartless. And yet, we are as if a drug to them. They are unable to stay away for long. Great imagery.

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Cj Heck 13 December 2005

Your muse will again find you, my friend. It's merely 'a rest from writing' as you said. Enjoy your rest, for the overwhelming need to write can be a ball and chain! Warmest regards and respect, Vincent, CJ

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Vivian Ogena 13 December 2005

nice wording, i love to write and i also love to read for rhyme that makes me dance, dance to the beat... great poem! ! ! keep on writing (just little work for spelling though) 10 for you

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 13 December 2005

expertly penned, however, i sincerely hope you are not going to stop writing as i would miss you terribly...even for a short spell as i thoroughly enjoy your work! Faith

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