Saturday, September 5, 2009

# A Responsibility -3 Liner Comments

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Sandhya S N 09 September 2009

Yes... It may be the real cause of many problems. regards sandhya

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Louis Rams 07 September 2009

it could have been a one liner. TRUTH! a ten

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 September 2009

Truth can be realized through responsible means only.

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Smiley Hooker 06 September 2009

I hope I got you right, my friend...being responsible is our commitment to ourselves as a good person, and so truthfulness. The truth sometimes hurt but we must face reality. Thanks for sharing, Sam.

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Ravi A 06 September 2009

I did not actually catch you. Realization of truth is after all not a responsibility but self actualization. This is all I know.

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Carol Gall 06 September 2009

nice 3 liner meaningful

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 06 September 2009

Dear Samanyan, Thanks for your invite. I liked the poem. short and sweet with deep meaning inside. However, I would have liked it to be in a perfect Haiku format i. e 5-7-5 syllable break-up. I've given you 10 for the contents. Why not comment on five Haikus I posted on 3rd september? Thanks Rajkumar

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Sandra Martyres 06 September 2009

Very true indeed...a meaningful 3 -liner...

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