A Resolution Comments

A beautiful tribute to (sounds like?) an independence day...as well as a sweet goal for all, it seems.

Your poem presents a great resolution on a great day. This is the only way to pay tribute to the martyrs who sacrificed themselves for the freedom of our lovely nation, India. Thanks for sharing such an optimistic poem.

Reviving love and trust on the Independence Day by new wish and determination for better harmony and understanding. Nice.