Saturday, January 17, 2009

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The stonewall and the brook
A disfigured snow mound
Reborn in my thoughts!
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Deva De Silva
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Fiona Davidson 21 January 2009

This is a lovely peaceful look at a winters day...beautiful...thank you...Fi

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 21 January 2009

Wonderful poem. Those words and phrases that you have used have painted this beautiful scenery elegantly. 'The shrug of a sparrow' makes my skin gooseflesh. 'The garland of stream... as a black stroke of an artist'... a beautiful poetic stylish expression. And the budding leaves of Tulip, send us the message that winter is fading? Very nice poem Deva... appreciate the work.

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Deva De Silva 17 January 2009

A winter's day in Canada

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