A Request Of Love (Sonnet) Comments

I will meet you on the edge of Space: My heart at core—your dwelling-place; And soul in soul we'll unify, To new Horizons to define! ......nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem on love nicely executed.10

Love to feel! In silent hope awaits to share. Nice piece of work.

A beautiful love poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and subtly penned. The divine ordained function of the heart is to love. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

The first two lines create a trension: Love is called essential but in the very next line it's called a rarity. But the point is love is a part of our human identity; the term rarity refers to the world in which we may or may not find satisfaction. The language of the poem is so vivid I was almost lulled into thinking it's all satisfaction. Not quite. THE ROOT OF LIFE WHICH GROWS IN LIGHT is a beautiful description of love with the organic image of the root emphasizes the continuous growth of love.. I WILL MEET YOU ON THE EDGE OF SPACE is wonderful hyperbole. It shows a commitment virtually unconditional; your readiness asserted with no doubts darkening the moment. MY HEART AT CORE, YOUR DWELLING PLACE - What a gift of self that affirms, what trust is behind this declaration. The closing two lines are a forecast of the possibilities of such commitment. This is truly a VISION OF LOVE.

amazing and powerful poem...worthy of much praise!