Wednesday, July 4, 2012

A Request Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let me sit here for a while,
For I have had enough of this digging.
Digging hard, digging rough;
And as I dig,
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Shouvik Roy
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Kasia Fedyk 04 July 2012

Oh Shouvik I love this one so much I became that man while reading it and it touched me so much, i could feel every emotion running through my veins and how it felt just to rest and let the nature caress his being. It is a Beautiful poem. Thank you! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++

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Unwritten Soul 04 July 2012

This work, it really done with a good structure, like your other poems, the most good thing in a poem is the differences of the message...and how we can take it to ponder..and could be better if feeling is written too, this is a good job shouvik, Have a good time writing for next_Unwritten Soul

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 04 July 2012

Really nice composition. Keep it up. The words were carefully carved and it deserves a thumbs up

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Neela Nath Das 04 July 2012

Really, very nice.The word pictures are very vivid.Well-crafted.The flow of emotion has reached to climax gradually.Marvelous.Khub Valo.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 July 2012

Good poem Shouvik, congratulation. I invite you to read my poem and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra, Titilagarh, Odisha, India Mob 09437366644

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