Let me sit here for a while,
For I have had enough of this digging.
Digging hard, digging rough;
And as I dig,
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This work, it really done with a good structure, like your other poems, the most good thing in a poem is the differences of the message...and how we can take it to ponder..and could be better if feeling is written too, this is a good job shouvik, Have a good time writing for next_Unwritten Soul
Really nice composition. Keep it up. The words were carefully carved and it deserves a thumbs up
Really, very nice.The word pictures are very vivid.Well-crafted.The flow of emotion has reached to climax gradually.Marvelous.Khub Valo.
Good poem Shouvik, congratulation. I invite you to read my poem and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra, Titilagarh, Odisha, India Mob 09437366644
Oh Shouvik I love this one so much I became that man while reading it and it touched me so much, i could feel every emotion running through my veins and how it felt just to rest and let the nature caress his being. It is a Beautiful poem. Thank you! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++