Wednesday, November 9, 2011

A Request Comments

Rating: 4.2

As a man from nowhere
I speak on behalf of myself
I wish to see the truth
The truth in all ways
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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

beautiful request. if only more people ad the same request for peaceful existence. lovely thoughts

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

beautiful request. if only more people ad the same request for peaceful existence. lovely thoughts

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Jessa Marielle Cereneo 20 July 2012

like it much... Which few may think But am sure others will blink What I wish may be too foolish But in fact no one is wise.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2011

What I wish may be too foolish But in fact no one is wise... no it is desire and wish and nothing wrong in it... nice poem...10

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Yoseph Lupu 16 December 2011

A very wise subject you deal with! You really believe, that life has given us much hope! It is true!

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Michele Kostelnik Parrillo 30 November 2011

I love the poem about the land we may reach someday. I call it a Kingdom. It is not of this earth- it is of God. Jesus came here to save us all from this world we made into a pretty awful place. It moved me - to know one so young would want to have a beautiful land where there is no suffering and only beauty.

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Anthony Zeigler 29 November 2011

Wow....This really just made my day. im walking in school all upset and i read this. Fantastic! 'What I wish may be too foolish But in fact no one is wise.' Epic

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grame peele 17 November 2011

i hope your angle fits well to the present context. nice

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lover of poetry sweet 09 November 2011

your request needs to be accepted brother. excellent 10

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Cathy Yancey-serna 09 November 2011

Loved it! Seems to be longing for peace & acceptence

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