Saturday, January 30, 2010

A Republic Day Remembrance Comments

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A history rich in culture and heritage,
our nation prides itself in being the best,
in communal harmony, in brotherhood,
it stood untarnished to the time's test.
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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 30 January 2010

I liked ur poem as I also wrote on a similar theme of late. It is on Netaji Subhas Chandra Bose. Plz go through it and comment if u have time. Ur poem could be more poetic. Probably u wrote in a hurry. Prosaic wordings should be avoided. Idea and passions excellent...keep on writing..

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