The pain inside burned deep in my heart
leaving a scar that wouldn't heal
It felt like a poker stabbed deep inside
twisted and turned to make the hole bigger
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A poem with a strong message that a person learns from the happenings in the life...The ecstacy of love is not good always....But still with pinching past one should always be hopeful and never practice the past experience again....10 Best Wishes Naseer
was it the beauty of skin or the smile in the eyes..................excellent exposition of heart within, quite awe-inspiring, the humble words spruce up the skin of grace, wroght ingenious bedecking the essence of humanism through the imagery, world when at the crical criss-cross, wellpenned,10+++++
a great poem, i felt like you were speakng to me. ur a very good writer!
a great poem..lovely instrospective write..it flows well and rhymes..A10
This poem is excelaaaaant! These were the type of thoughts and ideas that i was trying to dig up and bring forth to the poem of love tat you've ead of mine. You just did it so much better with great imagery. Way ta go! I hadda give ya a tenner here, only because u deserved it so well. God bless all poets-MJG.
Beautifully written and loaded with heartfelt experiences..10+