A Reply(6) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Reply(6)

Rating: 5.0


She lodged a complaint against a poetess,
Her mother locked the windows of access,
After reading the uncalled limerick,
She becomes now too sick,
No more wears her pink slippy dress.

Wednesday, October 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: reply
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 08 October 2016

No harm did the poetess intend Nor had the least desire to offend It was a warning Done with much caring So that men's wicked gaze, girls could prevent! Greatly enjoyed your limerick... Akhtarji

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Rajnish Manga 06 October 2016

Wow.... A limerick for a limerick, a limerick and a rejoinder but from a different quarter. Enjoyed both these poems thoroughly. Full of fun. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2016

A befitting reply to a humorous limerick........enjoyed it.10+++

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Bri Edwards 05 October 2016

yes! speaking for all peeping Toms, let me say: girls and women, all, remove your slippy dresses. let down your tresses. we don't care how much, your room, a mess is! i too can do naughty, Akhtar. bri :) this COULD go into the showcase. hee-hee. should we show Valsa?

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Khalid Saifullah 05 October 2016

Interesting limerick by Valsa George and a naughty reply by Akhtar Jawad.

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